Newly rewritten developer docs for DSSS
Gregor Richards
Richards at codu.org
Fri Aug 10 15:14:30 PDT 2007
Bill Baxter wrote:
> Gregor Richards wrote:
>> Bill Baxter wrote:
>
>>
>> *whew*!
>>
>> OK, I think that I covered these fairly effectively. When I first
>> wrote this doc, I had immediate peer review, but these additions did
>> not, so rewording suggestions are welcome.
>>
>
> ...[good additions cut]...
>
>> > And one comment:
>> > - "The 'set' command sets a setting" -- this not a very helpful
>> > description.
>> > It's not clear why you need 'set'. It says it's for doing things
>> > 'on-the-fly'. But what does that mean? Is
>> > prebuild = echo "Hi"
>> > not on-the-fly?
>>
>> I changed the wording:
>>
>> "The 'set' command sets a dsss.conf file setting while DSSS is
>> actually running."
>>
>> Better?
>
> Well, it still basically says "'set' sets a setting", which is defining
> a word by using the word. It doesn't clarify what you mean by a
> 'setting'. That should be explained. Also, it might help if you
> explained in the 'set' section more clearly what problem 'set' is
> designed to solve.
I honestly haven't a clue how to make this more clear. I'm not saying
that it's at all clear, just that I don't know how to improve it. What
exactly a setting is is described in an above section, so repeating it
there wouldn't be helpful. If you can suggest a wording, that would help.
>
> And as for the 'on-the-fly' part, which you changed to "while DSSS is
> actually running" -- are there other commands that do something when
> DSSS is not running!?
No, but there's no other way to set a setting while DSSS is running.
>
> --bb
- Gregor Richards
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