Website message overhaul, pass 2

Jude Young 10equals2 at gmail.com
Sun Nov 20 03:40:34 PST 2011


On Sun 20 Nov 2011 05:09:28 AM CST, Paulo Pinto wrote:
> Looks great.
>
> While I am not native English speaker, would it not be better
> to exachange the position of *naturally* and *compiles* on the following
> sentence?
>
> From:
>
> "D naturally compiles to efficient native code."
>
> To:
>
> "D compiles naturally to efficient native code."
>
> -- 
> Paulo
>
> Am 20.11.2011 09:40, schrieb Andrei Alexandrescu:
>> Thanks to all who provided feedback! I read again the entire thread,
>> then made one more pass:
>>
>> http://d-programming-language.org/new/
>>
>> I didn't make technical/aesthetic changes (JS/noJS, placement of news,
>> links to secondary pages etc) so when providing additional feedback
>> please focus on the core message.
>>
>> There are significant changes of content: some keywords are different,
>> text is shorter, no more "community" section (probably it'll go on a
>> different page).
>>
>> There's a prominent example at the top. I'm thinking to rotate that
>> randomly, and pick examples out of an always-running contest.
>>
>>
>> Thanks,
>>
>> Andrei
>
>

Nice catch.  It does indeed sound better your way.


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