Website message overhaul, pass 2

[Jimmy Cao]

2011/11/20 Robert Clipsham <robert at octarineparrot.com>

> On 20/11/2011 21:49, Vladimir Panteleev wrote:
>
>> The D Programming Language: Modern Convenience, Modeling Power, Native
>>> Efficiency
>>>
>>
>> I'm not sure about the capitalization
>>
>
> Too many capitals!
>
> The D Programming Language: Modern convenience, modeling power, native
> efficiency.
>
> The - Start of a sentence
> D Programming Language - a noun.
> Modern - comes after a colon.


I agree.  If you have each four as its own sentence, it gives them equal
emphasis, which is strange. "The D Programming Language" should be the
primary statement, followed by a colon, and then an enumeration of those
four selling points.

Although, I think that listing the selling points like that is silly and
that "Welcome to D" would suffice.
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