Okay, I made my ask-for-the-moon comments, here is the picky stuff:<br><br>Misspelling on page 19, line 4 of text, "spcified".<br><br>I think the example for 1.7.1 should read "third handler" instead of "second handler".<br>
<br>The last paragraph on page 19 is unwieldy. Maybe promote the phrase "(in the example...in that order)" to being its own sentence.<br>Instead of "is malformed" maybe explain more, like "will never be called, since any matching message would have been delivered to<br>
the first handler, and is therefore flagged as an error."<br><br>Second paragraph in 1.7.2 has structure like:<br><br>"The answer is simple -- just <foo>, for example like this:"<br><br>Phrases "just", "for example", and "like this" are kind of redundant -- you could simplify to:<br>
<br>"The answer is simply to <foo>, for example:"<br><br>Kevin<br><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Tue, Jan 19, 2010 at 5:30 AM, Andrei Alexandrescu <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:andrei@erdani.com">andrei@erdani.com</a>></span> wrote:<br>
<blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="border-left: 1px solid rgb(204, 204, 204); margin: 0pt 0pt 0pt 0.8ex; padding-left: 1ex;">Apparently I can't convince Brad that I'm not spamming - my attachments keep on being delayed through moderation because they're too big.<br>
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I uploaded draft 5 here:<br>
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<a href="http://www.erdani.com/d/fragment.preview.pdf" target="_blank">www.erdani.com/d/fragment.preview.pdf</a><br>
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Again: Don't re-read what you've already read, move forward. Feedback<br>
would be appreciated. Sean, Walter, please let me know quickly if you<br>
see any major implementation issues.<br>
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Thanks,<br>
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Andrei<br>
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