Use of first person in a book

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Andrei Alexandrescu wrote:
> Thanks to all who answered! I wish there was such consensus in other
> matters as well :o).
> 
> Allow me to put forth an excerpt from TDPL without any particular
> reason: http://erdani.com/tdpl/excerpt.pdf
> 
> 
> Andrei
> 

"There are many random number generators out there, among
which the fast and well-studied linear congruential generators."
     ^
You are missing an "are"

Personally I'd append something like:

"Therefore we wish to test the parameters to our generator" to the
paragraph starting "But there is a rub."

Also:

The penultimate paragraph about interpretation process being slow seems
rather redundant. It's just an implementation detail and dmd compiles
huge libraries 1000x faster than c++ anyway.

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