Newly rewritten developer docs for DSSS
Bill Baxter
dnewsgroup at billbaxter.com
Thu Aug 9 22:41:40 PDT 2007
Gregor Richards wrote:
> Bill Baxter wrote:
>
> *whew*!
>
> OK, I think that I covered these fairly effectively. When I first wrote
> this doc, I had immediate peer review, but these additions did not, so
> rewording suggestions are welcome.
>
...[good additions cut]...
> > And one comment:
> > - "The 'set' command sets a setting" -- this not a very helpful
> > description.
> > It's not clear why you need 'set'. It says it's for doing things
> > 'on-the-fly'. But what does that mean? Is
> > prebuild = echo "Hi"
> > not on-the-fly?
>
> I changed the wording:
>
> "The 'set' command sets a dsss.conf file setting while DSSS is actually
> running."
>
> Better?
Well, it still basically says "'set' sets a setting", which is defining
a word by using the word. It doesn't clarify what you mean by a
'setting'. That should be explained. Also, it might help if you
explained in the 'set' section more clearly what problem 'set' is
designed to solve.
And as for the 'on-the-fly' part, which you changed to "while DSSS is
actually running" -- are there other commands that do something when
DSSS is not running!?
--bb
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