Our docs should be more beautiful
Carl Vogel via Digitalmars-d
digitalmars-d at puremagic.com
Mon Jul 18 18:28:35 PDT 2016
On Monday, 18 July 2016 at 15:56:29 UTC, Andrei Alexandrescu
wrote:
> I was proofreading
> http://dtest.thecybershadow.net/artifact/website-f26d7179b8449e89e1961391fde9f221813c707c-04d0496c2d8cecedc4d75c919646d564/web/phobos-prerelease/std_experimental_checkedint.html and there are a few ways in which our docs could look better.
>
> * My pet dream was to work on a project with a beautiful
> justified and hyphenated website. After endless debates,
> ugliness has won - I'm looking at a eye-scratching ragged right
> edge.
>
> * The constraint on "struct Checked" is not formatted the same
> as the other constraints.
>
> * Vertical spacing is just too fluffy. Looking e.g. at the docs
> for "Payload" and "hook" - each has a short description. The
> vspace between definition and description is too tall. The
> vspace between the description and the next definition is too
> tall. The grayed space within which the definition itself sits
> has too large up and bottom margins. The vspace above "Jump
> to:" is too high. Literally all vertical spacing is larger than
> it should be.
>
> * The red vertical line on the left of each definition is meh.
> There's a bit more sense for struct definitions because of the
> "Jump to:" real estate. But for each little one-line
> definition, the red bar is just odd. Also, there is no change
> in color as indentation goes in (which would be a useful cue
> for long struct definitions).
>
> * I don't see a point to the boxes within which each definition
> + its comments sits. Then there's one more box for the example!
> Boxes, boxes everywhere, and nary a drop to drink. They'd make
> sense e.g. if one could collapse a box. As such - hey, they
> just add more vspace :o).
>
> * The vspace between the ditto'ed definitions "enum auto min;"
> and "enum auto max;" is again too large.
>
> * The grayed out constraints are also indented horizontally -
> by a lot. If they're already distinguished by color, no need to
> indent them. Oh, then I saw if you hover you see "Constraints:
> " written in the space that seem to be indentation. Could we
> format that in non-code font at least?
>
> * Spacing between doc paragraphs (see e.g. doc of opCast) seems
> to be 80% line height. Should be 50%.
>
> * The enumerated items (see doc of opChecked) seem to be the
> only artifact that's properly spaced vertically. I guess nobody
> discovered them so they're at the system default.
>
> * "0 Contributors" should not be displayed at the bottom if
> there are no contributors. But I assume that's only the case
> before the pull is merged?
>
>
> Andrei
I'm not going to get involved this round of bikeshedding, (except
to say that yes, the docs are far from perfect, and also that
justification/hyphenation on the Web is a mixed bag, and
right-ragged with a good line-length is a fine and robust
solution).
But I'd like to give some resources for reference. Racket's docs
have actually been designed by a professional typographer, so
might be a good reference point. Example:
https://docs.racket-lang.org/reference/flonums.html
And that the same person has an excellent online resource for
typographic style:
http://practicaltypography.com/
And it's good to have something like that (no matter if it's
somewhat arbitrary) to decide these kinds of endlessly debatable
issues. (Notice the site is left-justified/right-ragged :))
"Keep in mind that the justification engine of a word
processor or web browser is rudimentary compared to that of a
professional page-layout program. So if I’m making a
word-processor document or web page, I’ll always left-align
the text, because justification can look clunky and coarse.
Whereas if I’m using a professional layout program, I might
justify." (http://practicaltypography.com/justified-text.html)
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