[dmd-concurrency] draft 5

[Andrei Alexandrescu]

Thanks very much, Kevin.

Apologies for the typos at least. I didn't manage to get Aquamacs to 
spellcheck yet.


Andrei

Kevin Bealer wrote:
> Okay, I made my ask-for-the-moon comments, here is the picky stuff:
> 
> Misspelling on page 19, line 4 of text, "spcified".
> 
> I think the example for 1.7.1 should read "third handler" instead of 
> "second handler".
> 
> The last paragraph on page 19 is unwieldy.  Maybe promote the phrase 
> "(in the example...in that order)" to being its own sentence.
> Instead of "is malformed" maybe explain more, like "will never be 
> called, since any matching message would have been delivered to
> the first handler, and is therefore flagged as an error."
> 
> Second paragraph in 1.7.2 has structure like:
> 
> "The answer is simple -- just <foo>, for example like this:"
> 
> Phrases "just", "for example", and "like this" are kind of redundant -- 
> you could simplify to:
> 
> "The answer is simply to <foo>, for example:"
> 
> Kevin
> 
> On Tue, Jan 19, 2010 at 5:30 AM, Andrei Alexandrescu <andrei at erdani.com 
> <mailto:andrei at erdani.com>> wrote:
> 
>     Apparently I can't convince Brad that I'm not spamming - my
>     attachments keep on being delayed through moderation because they're
>     too big.
> 
>     I uploaded draft 5 here:
> 
>     www.erdani.com/d/fragment.preview.pdf
>     <http://www.erdani.com/d/fragment.preview.pdf>
> 
>     Again: Don't re-read what you've already read, move forward. Feedback
>     would be appreciated. Sean, Walter, please let me know quickly if you
>     see any major implementation issues.
> 
> 
>     Thanks,
> 
>     Andrei
> 
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